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2013-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My father didn't give me the advice yet. But my mother gave me the best advice. And it is "Don't make mistake" My mom alaways told me that "I'm an able man at study". However she also say "you are extorting your study skill" That's right. I will try hard to don't make mistake.

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A wonderful Wednesday Tom! Thank you for sharing this to me. ^^ I enjoyed reading it. How was your day? You are doing great in class! You deserve a round of applause! Based on your essay, your parents always remind you to do your best in everything that you do. ^^ I noticed that you are using new words in your sentences. Awesome! Check the meaning of the word first and the synonym of it before using it in a sentence.  You can do it! See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina   My father didn\'t give me the advice yet. >> My father didn\'t give me an advice yet. >> OR: My father didn\'t give me a piece of advice yet.But my mother gave me the best advice. >> Correct! >> OR: But my mother gave me the best piece of advice. And it is \"Don\'t make mistake\" >> She told me, \"Don\'t make a mistake\". >> OR: My mother told me not to make a mistake.My mom alaways told me that \"I\'m an able man at study\". >> My mom always tell me that I am an able man in studying. >> OR: My mom always tell me, \"You are an able man in studying\". >> OR: My mom always tell me that I am competent in terms of studying.However she also say \"you are extorting your study skill\" >> Did you mean: However, she also told me, \" You are forcing yourself to study\". (Please explain this sentence to me in class. ^^)That\'s right. >> She is right. I will try hard to don\'t make mistake. >> I will try hard not to make a mistake.

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