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Actually, I am not close to my father. but I often talk with my mom and she often give me advices. the best memorable advice she gave me is "the people who consider himself or herself worth knows the importance of moderation for health and beauty". I tend to put off what I have to do and avoid reality. I have tried to reflect on my faults and practice tasks in order of importance. And she always belive me no matter when I have a good job or not. Thanks to her trust for me, I can also trust my self, and go on my way.

Hello Cassandra^^ Thank you for sending this in! I am so happy that you are my student. ^^ You are doing great in class! Please go over the corrections below for your improvement. ^^ I enjoyed reading your essay. ^^ Take Care! Teacher Nina   Actually, I am not close to my father. >> Correct! but I often talk with my mom and she often give me advices. >> Correct! the best memorable advice she gave me is \"the people who consider himself or herself worth knows the importance of moderation for health and beauty\". >> The best memorable advice she gave me is that \"The people who consider himself or herself worthy knows the importance of moderation in health and beauty\". I tend to put off what I have to do and avoid reality. >> I tend to put off what I have to do and avoid the reality. I have tried to reflect on my faults and practice tasks in order of importance. >> I have tried to reflect on my faults and practice the tasks in order to know the importance it. >> Better: I have many tasks that I have to do and I need to prioritize it.  (Thank you for your explaining. ^^) And she always belive me no matter when I have a good job or not. >> And she always believe in me no matter when I have a good job or not. Thanks to her trust for me, I can also trust my self, and go on my way. >> Thanks to her for trusting me, I can also trust myself and go on my way.