homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.a
2.b
3.a
4.b
5.b
6.a
7.a
8.b
9.a
10.a
Today, Iplayed "River flows in you"with piano. Its composer is "Iruma".
He is famous composer.And I also played "He is a pirate"
You may know this song.Because I told you this song.
강사 첨삭
A gracious Thursday to you Tom ^_^
Wow! It\'s already the fourth day of the week!
I am glad that you tell me a lot of songs these days.
I think I already heard that song, but it is different from the one that you recorded, am I right?
I am proud of you because you can play a lot of songs. ^^ Keep it up!
You did a pretty nice job with your homework. Please go over the corrections I provided for you.
I hope to hear one of those songs someday.
See you in class! Enjoy the rest of the day!
Teacher Nina
1.a
>> CORRECT! 2.b
>> CORRECT! 3.a
>> might not 4.b
>> could not 5.b
>> CORRECT! 6.a
>> CORRECT! 7.a
>> CORRECT! 8.b
>> CORRECT! 9.a
>> CORRECT! 10.a
>> might not Today, Iplayed \"River flows in you\"with piano.
>> I played the song titled \" River flows in you\" on the piano today.
Its composer is \"Iruma\".
>> The composer is \"Iruma\".
>> OR: The composer of the song is \"Iruma\".He is famous composer.
>> He is a famous composer.
And I also played \"He is a pirate\"
>> CORRECT!
>> And I also played the song titled \" He is a pirate\".You may know this song.
>> You might know this song.
>> OR: You might be familiar with this song.
Because I told you this song.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: It is because I told you about this song.
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