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2013-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.a 2.b 3.a 4.b 5.b 6.a 7.a 8.b 9.a 10.a Today, Iplayed "River flows in you"with piano. Its composer is "Iruma". He is famous composer.And I also played "He is a pirate" You may know this song.Because I told you this song.

강사 첨삭

A gracious Thursday to you Tom ^_^ Wow! It\'s already the fourth day of the week! I am glad that you tell me a lot of songs these days. I think I already heard that song, but it is different from the one that you recorded, am I right? I am proud of you because you can play a lot of songs. ^^ Keep it up! You did a pretty nice job with your homework. Please go over the corrections I provided for you. I hope to hear one of those songs someday. See you in class! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina   1.a >> CORRECT! 2.b >> CORRECT! 3.a >> might not 4.b >> could not 5.b >> CORRECT! 6.a >> CORRECT! 7.a >> CORRECT! 8.b >> CORRECT! 9.a >> CORRECT! 10.a >> might not Today, Iplayed \"River flows in you\"with piano. >> I played the song titled \" River flows in you\" on the piano today. Its composer is \"Iruma\". >> The composer is \"Iruma\". >> OR: The composer of the song is \"Iruma\".He is famous composer. >> He is a famous composer. And I also played \"He is a pirate\" >> CORRECT! >> And I also played the song titled \" He is a pirate\".You may know this song. >> You might know this song. >> OR: You might be familiar with this song. Because I told you this song. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is because I told you about this song.

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