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I always play game.When I have a camp with other people,we always play with pillow.
I also play the Zombie game. It makes feel comfortable, or we also singing song.
강사 첨삭
An enthusiastic Friday to youTom!
T.G.I.F!! This week was a marvelous one for me because of your performance!
You are always accepting corrections and suggestions to improve your skills!
I like playing the game, \"Plants vs. Zombies 2\" or \"Zombie Smasher\".
Let us talk more about this later in class. See you!
Can\'t wait to talk to you! Have fun!
Teacher Nina
I always play game.
>> I always play a game.
>> OR: I always play games.
When I have a camp with other people,we always play with pillow.
>> When I go camping with other people, we always play \"pillow fight\".
>> OR: When I go camping with my friends, we always play \"pillow fight\".I also play the Zombie game.
>> I also play zombie games.
It makes feel comfortable, or we also singing song.
>> It makes me feel comfortable and we also sing.
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