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I think that saying hateful thing is very exhausting each other.
Sometiems critical thinhking may develope the academic.
But the most of time, it very iterreting real contact true interpersonal relationship.
Thouhgts, says and waves can make the direction of life.
If we would judge every other and things, it would be insufficient to love others.
So one small thoughts can change the relationship, future and everything.
The sereise of one small may destroy the relationship and life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, there! Long time no see, Ma\'am!
I am fascinated reading your work^^
Anyways, I really hate people who say bad things against others.
It breaks hearts and not only that, it also destroys relationships^^
I think that saying hateful thing is very exhausting each other.
>>I think that saying hateful things is very exhausting to each other.Sometiems critical thinhking may develope the academic.
>>Sometimes critical thinking may develop the academic sense of something.But the most of time, it very iterreting real contact true interpersonal relationship.
>>But most of the time, it very interesting because it is the real interpersonal relationship.Thouhgts, says and waves can make the direction of life.
>>Thoughts, says and waves can make the direction of life.If we would judge every other and things, it would be insufficient to love others.
>>If we would judge everything, it would be insufficient to love others.So one small thoughts can change the relationship, future and everything.
>>So one small thought can change relationship, future and everything.The sereise of one small may destroy the relationship and life.
>>The series of one small thing may destroy relationship and life.
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