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2013-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you could be married with a foreign (man/woman), how do you think your life would change? It's very interesting. I think language is important each other. If I could be married with a foreign, he or I already can speak foreign language well. Therefore we have had many communication so we can understand each other and each culture continually. However it is not all. Basically, married life may not different big but it may different with family, friend, neighborhood and so on. I wll have to do middle role like interperter. It is not easy so if he live in Korea, I have to teach Korean. This is because all people can happy and comfortable. If he doesn't want to learn my language, we can live foreign. I'm Okay. I may be adapted abroad. I also will enjoy my life. When I miss my hometwon, I will visit often in here. I really love my husband now. hahaha. Although he is foreign, it is no matter. But my life may change a little.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]! 

Marrying a foreigner is really quite interesting . 
I have friends who got married to a foreigner and I think language barrier is not a big problem. 
As long as you both love it other. right? kkk

Anyway, see you again tomorrow! 

Take care! 


Always, 

Kathrine ^^


If you could be married with a foreign (man/woman), how do you think your life would change?


It\'s very interesting.

>> correct!

I think language is important each other.

>> I think language is important to each other. 

If I could be married with a foreign, he or I already can speak foreign language well.

>> If I could be married with a foreigner, he and I can already speak the foreign language well. 

Therefore we have had many communication so we can understand each other and each culture continually.

>> Therefore we can communicate and so we can understand each other  and each other\'s culture. 

However it is not all. 

>> However, that is not all. 

Basically, married life may not different big but it may different with family, friend, neighborhood and so on.

>> Basically, a married life is not a big difference but it may be different with  family, friends, neighbors, and so on.

I will have to do middle role like interperter.

>> I have to do a middle role like an interpreter. 

It is not easy so if he live in Korea, I have to teach Korean.

>> It is not easy so if he lives in Korea so I have to teach Korean. 

This is because all people can happy and comfortable.

>> This because all people can be happy and comfortable. 

If he doesn\'t want to learn my language, we can live foreign.

>> If he doesn\'t want to learn my language, we can live in a foreign country. 

I\'m Okay.

>> if I\'m okay with that. 

I may be adapted abroad.

>> I may adapt living abroad. 

I also will enjoy my life. 

>> I will also enjoy my life. 

When I miss my hometwon, I will visit often in here.

>> When I miss my hometown, I will visit there often. 

I really love my husband now. hahaha.

>> correct! 

Although he is foreign, it is no matter.

>> Although he is not a foreigner, it doesn\'t matter. 

But my life may change a little.

>> correct! 

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