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2013-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What was the most flattering comment that you have received from someone? When I have received great comment from someone, I'm happy. The best is 'You are very beautiful.' This is because I'm a woman. However I can't received often like this. Also I satisfy just my husband do. When I'm most happy, my students say your class is very interesting. I can do better after good comment. These days, Many people don't like this word, You are good. Some parents say to their childrens 'Your problem is that you are too nice.' Actually I don't like this word when I heard from others. This is because tha mean is that you look foolish. But I want that children live good. There is book that title is 'The compliment dances whale' Alos, I heard this saying 'When also the whale dances praises.' I think we need to share fine things. So I'm efforting to give good things to my people. On the other hand we have to take care not to settle.

강사 첨삭

Great afternoon Ms. [Name]! 
I think compliments will make somebody feel better. 

So we either give compliments or receive compliments from other people for use to feel better and to make them feel better too. 

It\'s like a give and take relationship between the two. 

Thanks for today Ms. [Name]! 
Enjoy the rest of the day! 
See you. 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


What was the most flattering comment that you have received from someone?


When I have received great comment from someone, I\'m happy.

>> correct! 

The best is \'You are very beautiful.\'

>> correct! 

This is because I\'m a woman.

>> correct! 

However I can\'t received often like this.

>> correct! 

Also I satisfy just my husband do.

>> I am also satisfied if my husband will say it.

When I\'m most happy, my students say your class is very interesting.

>> I am also happy when my students say that our class is very interesting. 

I can do better after good comment. 

>> I can do better after a good comment. 

These days, Many people don\'t like this word, You are good. 

>> correct! 

Some parents say to their childrens \'Your problem is that you are too nice.\'

>> Some parents will say to their children, \"Your problem is that you are too nice.\" 

Actually I don\'t like this word when I heard from others.

>> Actually, I don\'t like these word when I hear it from others. 

This is because tha mean is that you look foolish.

>> This is because it means that you look foolish. 

But I want that children live good.

>> But I want that the children will live good. 

There is book that title is \'The compliment dances whale\'

>>  There is a book entitled \"The compliment dances whale.\"

Alos, I heard this saying \'When also the whale dances praises.\'

>> do you mean: I also heard this saying, \"The whale also dances when being praised.\"

I think we need to share fine things. 

>> I think we need to share the fine things. 

So I\'m efforting to give good things to my people.

>> So I\'m trying an effort to give good things to many people.  

On the other hand we have to take care not to settle.

>> On the other hand, we need to take care not to settle. 

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