homework
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Though you do not have enough in terms of money, do you feel happy with your life? Explain your answer.
If I do not have enough money, I feel unhappy in my life. That's because we spend some money to live at least such as paying bills, renting house, buying food, car and clothes. Without money, we can't live in a normal life.
And emotionally, money has its power. money brings peace with enjoying free time by seeing movie or having meal in a good restaurant. And it reduce comparison with other people's lives. More money gives you more comfortable life.
강사 첨삭
Hi there once again! Thank you so much for making time to do your homework despite your busy schedule. I really appreciate it.^^ Anyway, I absolutely agree with you. Money is very important in making our lives easier but then, it is not the sole source of happiness. ^^
~T.Juliet^^
Though you do not have enough in terms of money, do you feel happy with your life? Explain your answer.
>>CorrectIf I do not have enough money, I feel unhappy in my life.
>>Correct
That\'s because we spend some money to live at least such as paying bills, renting house, buying food, car and clothes.
>>Correct
Without money, we can\'t live in a normal life.
>>CorrectAnd emotionally, money has its power.
>>Correct
money brings peace with enjoying free time by seeing movie or having meal in a good restaurant.
>>Correct (observe capitalization though)
And it reduce comparison with other people\'s lives.
>>And it reduces comparison with other people\'s lives.
More money gives you more comfortable life.
>>Correct
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