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2013-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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If I could be any superhero I wolud make my only myself character. I don't envy just super power. I want to be a super healer. For example, if I touch their skin, their the mind and body of sickness be well. Or my says and wrritings insipirate thir soul and I want help that they can be the source of their life. And,actually I belive my ablility that help them. If we could connect our soul for each other, it would be possible.

강사 첨삭

Wow! Your answer amazed me, Ma\'am!^^ Please be a super healer to heal my aching heart haha! Just kidding^^ Anyways, thank you for this wonderful homework *_* Kindly be more careful about the spelling, capitalization and grammar patterns^^ See you later, Miss [이름]!! If I could be any super hero I wolud make my only myself character.>>If I could be any superhero, I would make my only character. I don\'t envy just super power. >>I don\'t envy any super power.I want to be a super healer. >>CORRECT!For example, if I touch their skin, their the mind and body of sickness be well. >>For example, if I touch their skin, their mind and body of sickness be well.Or my says and wrritings insipirate thir soul and I want help that they can be the source of their life. >>Or, my talks and writings insipire their soul to be the source of their life.And,actually I belive my ablility that help them. >>And actually, I believe my ablility can help them.If we could connect our soul for each other, it would be possible. >>If we could connect our soul with each other, it would be possible.  

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