homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could be any superhero I wolud make my only myself character.
I don't envy just super power.
I want to be a super healer.
For example, if I touch their skin, their the mind and body of sickness be well.
Or my says and wrritings insipirate thir soul and I want help that they can be the source of their life.
And,actually I belive my ablility that help them.
If we could connect our soul for each other, it would be possible.
강사 첨삭
Wow! Your answer amazed me, Ma\'am!^^
Please be a super healer to heal my aching heart haha! Just kidding^^
Anyways, thank you for this wonderful homework *_*
Kindly be more careful about the spelling, capitalization and grammar patterns^^
See you later, Miss [이름]!!
If I could be any super hero I wolud make my only myself character.>>If I could be any superhero, I would make my only character.
I don\'t envy just super power.
>>I don\'t envy any super power.I want to be a super healer.
>>CORRECT!For example, if I touch their skin, their the mind and body of sickness be well.
>>For example, if I touch their skin, their mind and body of sickness be well.Or my says and wrritings insipirate thir soul and I want help that they can be the source of their life.
>>Or, my talks and writings insipire their soul to be the source of their life.And,actually I belive my ablility that help them.
>>And actually, I believe my ablility can help them.If we could connect our soul for each other, it would be possible.
>>If we could connect our soul with each other, it would be possible.
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