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2013-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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Does your family have any special recipes that are passed down from generation to generation? No, there is no special recipes in our family. However, from grandma to mother, they often make cuisines adding plumliquid. plum, usually known as Japanese apricot, is used to enhance cuisine's flavor with its sweet and sour taste. Sometimes, it substitutes sugar for health reason. So, before winter comes, Whole family work to make plumliquid. In a time, we usually make 3 or 4 containers.

강사 첨삭

Hi there(^^,)   Thank you so much for doing your homework today. I am glad that you\'ve participated well in our class. I really appreciate how you express your ideas about our topic. If you have any questions regarding our topic today please feel free to ask. Be happy always and have faith.   Have a great night ahead and of course rest well. Take care always. See you tomorrow.   ~T. Juliet^^     No, there is no special recipes in our family. >> No, there are no special recipes in our family. However, from grandma to mother, they often make cuisines adding plumliquid. >> However, my grandma and my mother often make cuisines adding plum liquid. plum, usually known as Japanese apricot, is used to enhance cuisine\'s flavor with its sweet and sour taste. >> Correct (observe capitalization though) Sometimes, it substitutes sugar for health reason.>> Sometimes, it is a good substitute for sugar for health benefits. So, before winter comes, Whole family work to make plumliquid. >> So, before the winter season comes, my whole family work together in making plum liquid. In a time, we usually make 3 or 4 containers. >> After a while, we can usually make 3 or 4 containers.

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