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2013-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When you are late for school or work, do you make any excuses to your teacher or boss? In that case, what kind of excuses do you make? (* Using since) For my entire school days, the distance from my home to school always far away. Thus, it took long hours to go school and there was no one route to go school so that I should transfer. Since transfer needed some time that I can't guess and lateness due to transfer time sometimes occured, I often use this kind of excuses. Though I have used this excuses, I think that distance can't be the excuse of lateness. Because there are those who are late although their house is situated nearby. If I was diligent student, I would not have to late.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Thank you for making your homework and sharing your experience as well.I hope that you won\'t have a difficulty in going to school for you not to miss any discussion.I can see a very good essay because you were able to narrate the challenges you are encountering everyday in going to school.You just need to work on some words though for you to refrain from repeating same words.I am happy that you are improving a lot and if you have some problems in our class please do not hesitate to approach me.See you on our next class.

^^T.Juliet^^

When you are late for school or work, do you make any excuses to your teacher or boss? In that case, what kind of excuses do you make? (* Using since)
For my entire school days, the distance from my home to school always far away. Thus, it took long hours to go school and there was no one route to go

>> For my entire school days,the distance from my home to school is always far away.Thus,it took me long hours to reach school and there was no route directed to the school so I need to transfer from one vehicle to another.

school so that I should transfer. Since transfer needed some time that I can\'t guess and lateness due to transfer time sometimes occured, I often use this kind of excuses.

>>Since transferring needed some time I cannot determine whether I will be late or not.I often use this as an excuse every time I will be late.
Though I have used this excuses, I think that distance can\'t be the excuse of lateness. Because there are those who are late although their house is
 situated nearby. 

>>Though I have used this as a reason,I think that the distance can\'t be an excuse for tardiness because there are those who are late but their houses are situated nearby.  

If I was diligent student, I would not have to late. 

>>If I were a diligent student then I would not be late.

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