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I'm good at playing soccer.
I'm a striker.
I have 62 goal during 81 soccer time.(maybe 81 or 85.)
Our soccer team always win.
I use my right foot.
I'm good at shoting but I'm not good at defense.
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Hello there Tom!
Happy Friday! Yipee!
Who taught you how to play soccer? I think that kind of sport is really difficult, am I right?
How often do you play soccer in school?
I know that you are really good because you always do your best. Keep it up!
We can tallk more about this in class. See you!
I\'m excited to hear a lot of stories from you.
Take Care! Enjoy the rest of the night.
Teacher Nina
I\'m good at playing soccer.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I play soccer very well. I\'m a striker.
>> Correct! I have 62 goal during 81 soccer time.(maybe 81 or 85.)
>> Did you mean: I had 62 goals for 81 minutes of the game. ( Please explain this sentence in class. ^^)Our soccer team always win.
>> Correct! I use my right foot.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I use my right foot when playing. I\'m good at shoting but I\'m not good at defense.
>> I\'m good at shooting but not at defense.
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