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2013-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I'm good at playing soccer. I'm a striker. I have 62 goal during 81 soccer time.(maybe 81 or 85.) Our soccer team always win. I use my right foot. I'm good at shoting but I'm not good at defense.

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Hello there Tom! Happy Friday! Yipee! Who taught you how to play soccer? I think that kind of sport is really difficult, am I right? How often do you play soccer in school? I know that you are really good because you always do your best. Keep it up! We can tallk more about this in class. See you! I\'m excited to hear a lot of stories from you. Take Care! Enjoy the rest of the night. Teacher Nina   I\'m good at playing soccer. >> Correct! >> OR: I play soccer very well. I\'m a striker. >> Correct! I have 62 goal during 81 soccer time.(maybe 81 or 85.) >> Did you mean: I had 62 goals for 81 minutes of the game.  ( Please explain this sentence in class. ^^)Our soccer team always win. >> Correct! I use my right foot. >> Correct! >> OR: I use my right foot when playing. I\'m good at shoting but I\'m not good at defense. >> I\'m good at shooting but not at defense.

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