homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
E Composition
1. To many people. family means comfortable nest.
2. To some, it is important to have time for self-reflection.
3. To woman who work late, it is recommended that they must take a rest.
4. For woman, it can be dangerous to smoke.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
Good job on your homework! Just be careful of the use of articles and your
subject-verb agreement. And you are good to go. Take care! See you later!
-Verna
E Composition
1. To many people family means comfortable nest.
>>Correct
2. To some, it is important to have time for self-reflection.
>>Correct
3. To woman who work late, it is recommended that they must take a rest.
>>To woman who work slate, it is recommended that she must take a rest.
4. For woman, it can be dangerous to smoke.
>>For a woman, it can be dangerous to smoke.
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