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2013-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Hello. How are you? I'm not bad but it's too cold. I had a big event yesterday. Finally, I decided that I don't go to other city. I also contracted new apartment in here. It will build after two years. Thesedays there are a lot of things to me but sometime I can't believe it. What do you think is the difference between telling a partial truth and lying? I think it will be different depending on situation. A partial truth is not telling in full. I don't think it is lying. However, if we have to say in the court it will seem to be lying. We can tell a partial truth but if we have a bad intention, it will be a bad thing.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]. (*_~)

So you have already decided not to go. 
What made you decide on that? 
Well, whatever it is, I know that you made a decision not only for your own good but also for you husband. 

I wish you luck. 

Thanks for today! 

Take care! 

Keep yourself warm! 

See you! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


Hello.How are you?

>> correct! 

I\'m not bad but it\'s too cold.

>> correct! 

I had a big event yesterday.

>> correct! 

Finally, I decided that I don\'t go to other city.

>> Finally, I decided that I will not go to another city. 

I also contracted new apartment in here.

>> I also contracted to a new apartment here. 

It will build after two years.

>> It will be built after two years. 

Thesedays there are a lot of things to me but sometime I can\'t believe it. 

>>  These days, there are a lot of things happening to me but sometime, I can\'t believe it. 

 

What do you think is the difference between telling a partial truth and lying?


I think it will be different depending on situation.

>> I think it will be different depending on the situation. 

A partial truth is not telling in full.

>>  A partial truth is not telling the truth in full. 

I don\'t think it is lying.

>> correct! 

However, if we have to say in the court it will seem to be lying.

>>  However, if we have to speak in the court, it seems that we are lying. 

We can tell a partial truth but if we have a bad intention, it will be a bad thing.

>> correct! 

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