Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there once again Ms. [Name]!
Well, our past, present and future, really co-exist and related to each other.
So as what you mentioned, we are not who were are now in the present if we haven\'t learned something from the past.
And our present makes our future.
Anyway, thanks for today.
See you again tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Theseday, I was very busy so I couldn\'t do my homework.
>> These past few days, I was very busy so I couldn\'t do my homework.
I also my thinking was confusing.
>> My thinking was also confused.
But today, I thought I will try harder from now on because of your comment.
>> correct!
Thank you.
>> correct!
Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree?
No, I don\'t agree it.
>> No, I don\'t agree with it.
Because the past is good learning for present and future.
>> Because the past is a good learning for the present and the future.
However I think regret has no value for those of us living in the present.
>> However, I think regret has no value for us whoa re living in the present.
And if we only miss the past, it is foolish.
>> correct!
However, the past will be mirror of our life.
>> However, the past will be the mirror in our life.
Therefore, if it was not bad, I will not do it again.
>> correct!
And if it was not good, maybe it was successful experience so I can do it again.
>> And if it was not good, maybe it was a successful experience so I can do it again.
Nowadays, history is important.
>> correct!
We want to build our history rightly.
>> We want to build our history right.
And then, we will live hard on the model of history.
>> And then, we will live hard as the model of history.
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