Homework

2013-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

<composition about national holiday> Chuseok is one of national holidays in Korea. Chuseok is the holiday to celebrate the harvest of crops and to appreciate ancestors. On Chuseok, Most Koreans go to the hometown to meet their family. They visit their ancestral graves to pay their respects. So, traffic is very congested on Chuseok. Songpheon is the special food on Chuseok. It is half-moon shaped rice cake and it is stuffed with sesame seeds, sweet beans or chestnut filling.

강사 첨삭

Oh this is an informative composition Ma\'am Eun Young! You can actually make your own blog and posts your compositions. It is one way to enhance your English writing skill. Anyway, keep up sharing your thoughts Ma\'am. -Teacher Chloe <composition about national holiday>Chuseok is one of national holidays in Korea. >>Chuseok is one of the National holidays in Korea. Chuseok is the holiday to celebrate the harvest of crops and to appreciate ancestors. >>Chuseok is our Thanks Giving Day. It a major harvest festival and a three-day holiday. Families gathered to enjoy time together and give thanks to their ancestors for the plentiful harvest. On Chuseok, Most Koreans go to the hometown to meet their family. >>Koreans return to their ancestral hometowns to celebrate with their families. They visit their ancestral graves to pay their respects. >>We visit our ancestors\' grave to give our respect to them. So, traffic is very congested on Chuseok. >>There are congested city streets on Chuseok. Songpheon is the special food on Chuseok. >>Koreans celebrate Chuseok by making special foods, particularly a certain kind of rice cake called songpyeon.It is half-moon shaped rice cake and it is stuffed with sesame seeds, sweet beans or chestnut filling. >>Correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·