Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
<composition about some situation>
Hello, June. This is [Name].
I have something to tell you.
I am sorry that I made the camera you borrowed to me broken.
I dropped it so that its lens was broken.
I will return the camera if it is repaired. If not, I will buy a new one.
I am so sorry again.
강사 첨삭
Oh no Ma\'am Eunyoung!
I am so sorry to hear this.
What exactly happened?
Are you sure you are going to buy a new one if it won\'t be repaired?
You should have bought one for you.
I wish Santa Claus will give you a new camera and put it under your christmas tree tonight.
Anyway Ma\'am, let us talk more about this tomorrow.
Have a good night!
-Teacher Chloe
<composition about some situation>Hello, June.
>>Correct!
>>Hello June!
This is [Name].
>>Correct!I have something to tell you.
>>Correct!I am sorry that I made the camera you borrowed to me broken.
>>I am sorry to inform you that I broke the camera I borrowed from you.I dropped it so that its lens was broken.
>>I accidentally dropped it and the lens was broken. I will return the camera if it is repaired.
>>I will return to you the camera once it is being repaired.
If not, I will buy a new one.
>>Correct!I am so sorry again.
>>Correct!
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