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2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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<composition about some situation> Hello, June. This is [Name]. I have something to tell you. I am sorry that I made the camera you borrowed to me broken. I dropped it so that its lens was broken. I will return the camera if it is repaired. If not, I will buy a new one. I am so sorry again.

강사 첨삭

Oh no Ma\'am Eunyoung! I am so sorry to hear this. What exactly happened? Are you sure you are going to buy a new one if it won\'t be repaired? You should have bought one for you. I wish Santa Claus will give you a new camera and put it under your christmas tree tonight. Anyway Ma\'am, let us talk more about this tomorrow. Have a good night! -Teacher Chloe <composition about some situation>Hello, June. >>Correct! >>Hello June! This is [Name]. >>Correct!I have something to tell you. >>Correct!I am sorry that I made the camera you borrowed to me broken. >>I am sorry to inform you that I broke the camera I borrowed from you.I dropped it so that its lens was broken. >>I accidentally dropped it and the lens was broken. I will return the camera if it is repaired. >>I will return to you the camera once it is being repaired. If not, I will buy a new one. >>Correct!I am so sorry again. >>Correct!

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