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2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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If I would married with foriner, my life would change every aspects. Actually, before I meet my husband that my hope is marriage with French men. Because I loved french movie and I wanted to live there. If I really would with french man, I would lenrn french. And my chidren will be born mixed blood, they are may be Eurasian. Also I would cook French food and my children could dual languge speaker. Anyway this imagination is very interesting. I hope that live in other country with my familiy, someday.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Miss [이름]! Thanks for composing such a wonderful essay!^^ Marrying a foreigner is indeed challenging >.< Cultural differences and background can be some of the most difficult things to confront T^T Have a great week, Ma\'am and stay beautiful! *_* If I would married with foriner, my life would change every aspects. >>If I would marry a foreigner, my life would change in every aspect.Actually, before I meet my husband that my hope is marriage with French men. >>Actually, before I met my husband, I hope to marry a French man.Because I loved french movie and I wanted to live there. >>Because I loved French movies and I wanted to live there. >>OR: Actually, before I met my husband, I hoped  to marry a French man because I loved French movies and I wanted to live there.If I really would with french man, I would lenrn french. >>If I really would marry a French man, I would learn their language.And my chidren will be born mixed blood, they are may be Eurasian. >>And my children would be born with mixed blood, they would be Eurasians.Also I would cook French food and my children could dual languge speaker. >>Also I would cook French food and my children could be bilingual. Anyway this imagination is very interesting. >>Anyway, this imagination is very interesting.I hope that live in other country with my familiy, someday. >>I hope to live in another country with my familiy, someday.

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