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If I would married with foriner, my life would change every aspects.
Actually, before I meet my husband that my hope is marriage with French men.
Because I loved french movie and I wanted to live there.
If I really would with french man, I would lenrn french.
And my chidren will be born mixed blood, they are may be Eurasian.
Also I would cook French food and my children could dual languge speaker.
Anyway this imagination is very interesting.
I hope that live in other country with my familiy, someday.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Miss [이름]!
Thanks for composing such a wonderful essay!^^
Marrying a foreigner is indeed challenging >.<
Cultural differences and background can be some of the most difficult things to confront T^T
Have a great week, Ma\'am and stay beautiful! *_*
If I would married with foriner, my life would change every aspects.
>>If I would marry a foreigner, my life would change in every aspect.Actually, before I meet my husband that my hope is marriage with French men.
>>Actually, before I met my husband, I hope to marry a French man.Because I loved french movie and I wanted to live there.
>>Because I loved French movies and I wanted to live there.
>>OR: Actually, before I met my husband, I hoped to marry a French man because I loved French movies and I wanted to live there.If I really would with french man, I would lenrn french.
>>If I really would marry a French man, I would learn their language.And my chidren will be born mixed blood, they are may be Eurasian.
>>And my children would be born with mixed blood, they would be Eurasians.Also I would cook French food and my children could dual languge speaker.
>>Also I would cook French food and my children could be bilingual.
Anyway this imagination is very interesting.
>>Anyway, this imagination is very interesting.I hope that live in other country with my familiy, someday.
>>I hope to live in another country with my familiy, someday.
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