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2010-12-15 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1. My second language is English so it's little bit hard for me. 2. My Australian teacher name was Mrs. [Name] and she always helped me. 3. My secound parents is my aunt because I lived 4 years with my aunt. 4. I afraid English because I'm not really good at English. 5. When I learn about science I feel excited because science is like a magic. 6. Mathe is my favorite subject so I study math hard. 7. When I in Australian school I like to group work because if I did group work I can do this work easily.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework. You did great just be careful with the use of the article a.
Take care. See you tomorrow!

-Verna-

1. My second language is English so it's little bit hard for me.

>>My second language is English so it's a little bit hard for me.

2. My Australian teacher name was Mrs. [Name] and she always helped me.

>>My Australian teacher's name was Mrs. [Name] and she always helped me.

3. My secound parents is my aunt because I lived 4 years with my aunt.

>>My second parent is my aunt because I lived with her for?lt;/font> 4 years .

4. I afraid English because I'm not really good at English.

>>I'm afraid of English because I'm not really good at speaking in English.

5. When I learn about Science I feel excited because science is like a magic.

>>Correct

6. Mathe is my favorite subject so I study math hard.

>>Math is my favorite subject so I study hard.

7. When I in Australian school I like to group work because if I did group work I can do this work easily.

>>When I was in an Australian school I like to have a group work because if I participated in a group work, I can do my work easily.

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