homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
F. Activity
1. Yes, I do. sometimes I want to have the personal time.
2. I make time to go to the bookstore.
In Seoul which I live, there are many big bookstore.
I go around there and read something.
When I'm in bookstore, I can usually have time for self-reflection.
3. It is important for me to develop myself and have a united family.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again [이름],
You are very hard working. Thank you for the
effort that you are extending in learning English.
I think we have something we have something in
common that is contemplating inside the bookstore. kkk
Talk to you later!
-Verna-
F. Activity1. Yes, I do. Sometimes I want to have the personal time.
>>Correct2. I make time to go to the bookstore.
>>Correct
>> I find time to go to the bookstore.In Seoul which I live, there are many big bookstore.
>> In Seoul, where I live, there are many big bookstores.I go around there and read something.
>> CorrectWhen I'm in bookstore, I can usually have time for self-reflection.
>>Correct3. It is important for me to develop myself and have a united family.
>> Correct
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