Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]!
It\'s already noon!
How\'s the half of your day?
I hope you are still doing great.
Well, you made your choice on which to choose.
I think that would be easy since you will change you mind willingly after that.
But of course, it\'s the person\'s choice on whether it should be physically or emotionally.
Emotionally is I think the hardest part.
Anyway, thanks for today.
See you tomorrow! ^^
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Which situation do you think is more painful?
Being in a situation where someone forced you to do an action unwillingly mentally, or; forced you into an action that was of a physical nature?
In my case, two of situations are painful if it is forced.
>>
In my case, two of the situations are painful if it is forced.
I also may get a stress.
>> I may also be stressed.
I can do something pleasantly but I\'d like to do it willingly.
>> I can do something pleasant but I\'d like to do it willingly.
If I have to choose only one situation, I will choose action of a physical nature.
>> correct!
This is because I can change my mind while I\'m doing it.
>> correct!
If I chanage my thinking about the physical work, I can do it willingly.
>> correct! (spelling correction-change)
>> or: If I change my mind about the physical work, I can do it willingly.
I also have to find a enjoyable method.
>> I also have to find an enjoyable method.
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