Homework
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Great afternoon again Ms. [Name]!
Sometimes parents would sacrifice something for their kids.
But of course, you have a point on what you have said.
You can also enjoy and benefit when you go abroad with your kids.
But, you can work hard in your own country to support your children\'s education so no need to give up your career.
And I\'m pretty sure you are doing that for your kids.
See you tomorrow Ms. [Name]!
Thank you!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Would you be able to give up your career in your country and dedicate your life to your children\'s education overseas?
At first, I am worried domestic economy. Hahaha.
>> At first, I am worried about the domestic economy. Hahaha.
If I have a enoguh money or my husband can support us, I\'d like to go oversea with my childrens.
>> I I have enough money or my husband could support us, I\'d like to go overseas with my children.
I think it is good to me.
>> correct!
When I was young, I want to be a professional woman.
>> correct!
Now, I think family is most important so I can give up mine.
>> Now, I think family family is the most important so I can give up mine.
On the other hand, I can find a great course that is good to everybody.
>> On the other hand, I can find a great course which is good for everybody.
That is I can keep my career and my childrens have a good education.
>> That is, I can keep my career and children can have a good education.
However if I can\'t find it, I will go study abroad on the flea of children\'s education.
>> However, if I can\'t find it, I will go and study abroad fleeing my children\'s education.
Honestly, I want to go. Hahah.
>> correct!
I believe this experience be a help to my life.
>> I believe that this event will be helpful to my life.
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