homework
학생이 쓴 원문
No,that's not true.
All of the movies and TV aren't give us a hurtful thing.
But some TV is give us the hurtful thing.
*****
Teacher Nina!
I told you that I had a genius test.
I passed it.
Yeah~~
강사 첨삭
A bountiful Mid-week to you TOM!
Wow! I knew it! Excellent!
Congratulations! I am so proud of you!
You should treat yourself, you deserve to pamper yourself!
Tell me more about your answer in your homework. See you in class!
Teacher Nina
No,that\'s not true.
>> Correct!
>> Better: Movies and TV programs don\'t influence people in a negative way.All of the movies and TV aren\'t give us a hurtful thing.
>> Did you mean: Movies and TV programs aren\'t harmful to us.But some TV is give us the hurtful thing.
>> Did you mean: But there are some TV programs that might be harmful to us especially the younger ones. *****Teacher Nina!
>> Correct!I told you that I had a genius test.
>> I told you that I had an \"I.Q. test\".I passed it.
>> Correct!Yeah~~
>> Correct!
>> OR: Yes!
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