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2013-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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No,that's not true. All of the movies and TV aren't give us a hurtful thing. But some TV is give us the hurtful thing. ***** Teacher Nina! I told you that I had a genius test. I passed it. Yeah~~

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A bountiful Mid-week to you TOM! Wow! I knew it! Excellent! Congratulations! I am so proud of you! You should treat yourself, you deserve to pamper yourself! Tell me more about your answer in your homework. See you in class! Teacher Nina   No,that\'s not true. >> Correct! >> Better: Movies and TV programs don\'t influence people in a negative way.All of the movies and TV aren\'t give us a hurtful thing. >> Did you mean: Movies and TV programs aren\'t harmful to us.But some TV is give us the hurtful thing. >> Did you mean: But there are some TV programs that might be harmful to us especially the younger ones. *****Teacher Nina! >> Correct!I told you that I had a genius test. >> I told you that I had an \"I.Q. test\".I passed it. >> Correct!Yeah~~ >> Correct! >> OR: Yes!

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