homework
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What are the things that you can't live without?
I think, I can't live without my family.
family is big part of my life.
I love my family and I try to become one always.
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What are the things that you can\'t live without?
I think, I can\'t live without my family.
>>correct
family is big part of my life.
>>Family is a big part of my life.
>>Family has a big part in my life.
I love my family and I try to become one always.
>>I love my family and we always try to be united.
>>I love my family and we always try to be together.
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