homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't have to required to accept criticism.
I'm so proud of myself.(hi hi hi ha ha ha)
So,you can think that I'm so proud of myself.
But it's not true,OK? See you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom!
Happy Friday! It\'s the end of the line!
You made me smile because of your composition. ^^
I am so proud of you! Of course, I am!
Can\'t wait to talk to you! See you!
Do you have any special plans for tonight? Tell me in class.
Teacher Nina
I don\'t have to required to accept criticism.
>> I don\'t have to be required to accept criticisms.
>> OR: I don\'t have to accept criticisms.
>> Better: I didn\'t have any experience that required me to accept criticisms.I\'m so proud of myself.(hi hi hi ha ha ha)
>> Correct So,you can think that I\'m so proud of myself.
>> Correct But it\'s not true,OK?
>> Correct
See you!
>> Correct
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