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2013-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Leah

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1. Caroline _______ (have) a walkman, now she has an ipod. -> used to have 2. We haven't seen Bob very often since he got a promotion. He's very busy. He _________________(not be) so busy. - used not to being 3. I've just got my first job. It's exciting but I'll have _______________________(work) regular hours. -> used to working 4. It is difficult for Tom to drive in England. He _____________ (drive) on the left-hand side of the road. used to drive 5. When Peter was young, he ________________ (ride) a bicycle to school. -> used to ride <composition> There are many good points for internet. We can search every subject using internet. I think it is the main advantage of internet. However, internet is easy to be addictive for. It causes problems with people’s interactions of friends and loved ones I think that it is the main drawback of internet. People are easy to waste a lot of time on internet without knowing their spending time.

강사 첨삭

Hello! The Net indeed poses a lot of problems~

There are indeed advantages as well as disadvantages *_*

Anyways, I appreciate your opinion about this topic.

Have the most wonderful Monday and see you!

1. Caroline _______ (have) a walkman, now she has an ipod.
-> used to have

>>CORRECT!
2. We haven\'t seen Bob very often since he got a promotion. He\'s very busy. He _________________(not be) so busy.
- used not to being

>>He didn\'t use to be so busy.

3. I\'ve just got my first job. It\'s exciting but I\'ll have _______________________(work) regular hours.
-> used to working

>>It\'s exciting but I\'ll have to get used to working regular hours.
4. It is difficult for Tom to drive in England. He _____________ (drive) on the left-hand side of the road.
used to drive

>> He isn\'t used to driving on the left-hand side of the road.
5. When Peter was young, he ________________ (ride) a bicycle to school.
-> used to ride

>>CORRECT!
<composition>
There are many good points for internet.

>>There are many good points of the Internet.

>>OR: Internet has many advantages.
We can search every subject using internet.

>>We can look up every subject using the Internet.
I think it is the main advantage of internet.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I think the main advantage of the Internet is that we can look up every subject or topic using this tool.
However, internet is easy to be addictive for.

>>However, it is very easy to be an Internet addict.
It causes problems with people’s interactions of friends and loved ones

>>It causes problems with people\'s interaction with friends and loved ones.
I think that it is the main drawback of internet.

>>That is, I think, the main drawback of the Internet.
People are easy to waste a lot of time on internet without knowing their spending time.

>>People can easily waste a lot of time on the Net without knowing how to spend their time efficiently.

 

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