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2013-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Leah

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At 1)______ beginning of 2)____________ twentieth century, East Los Angeles became 3)______ popular immigrant destination. In 4)______ early 1900s, Russians, Jews, Japanese, and Mexicans all had 5)______ significant presence in 6)______ area. -> the, the , a, the, a, the <composition> The boss plays an important role in employee satisfaction. I think that the boss has to give the vision and mission to employees. The boss checks up the projects progress and business issues.

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At 1)______ beginning of 2)____________ twentieth century, East Los Angeles became 3)______ popular immigrant destination. In 4)______ early 1900s, Russians, Jews, Japanese, and Mexicans all had 5)______ significant presence in 6)______ area.
-> the,

>>Correct!

the ,

>>Correct!

 a,

>>Correct!

the,

>>Correct!

a,

>>Correct!

the
>>Correct!

<composition>
The boss plays an important role in employee satisfaction.

>>The boss plays an important role in employees\' satisfaction.
I think that the boss has to give the vision and mission to employees.

>>Correct!
The boss checks up the projects progress and business issues.

>>Correct! [projects\']

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