Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning!~
There are more people patronizing online shopping than offline.
However, there are also some advantages when you do it offline.
Can you enumerate some?^^
Then, let\'s talk about these things in our class.
See you!~
~T. Chloe~
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I think that the most difference between online shopping and offline shopping is to have products right or not.
>>I think that most of the differences between online and offline shopping have to do with the right products or otherwise.
If I buy something online, I have to wait until it is delivered.
>>Correct.
Instead, I don’t need to go out to buy something.
>>Correct.
or>>But, I don\'t need to go out to buy something.
Another difference is price.
>>Another difference is the price.
Online shopping is mostly cheaper than offline.
>>Correct.
Nowadays, I usually use online shopping more often than offline.
>>Correct.
I sometimes don’t like the delivered product so I have to exchange or refund it.
>>Correct.
At that time, I have to return the product by parcel service.
>>Correct.
It is very inconvenient.
>>Correct.
I consider carefully when I do online shopping.
>>I carefully consider it when I do online shopping.^^
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