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2013-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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<composition> I think that the most difference between online shopping and offline shopping is to have products right or not. If I buy something online, I have to wait until it is delivered. Instead, I don’t need to go out to buy something. Another difference is price. Online shopping is mostly cheaper than offline. Nowadays, I usually use online shopping more often than offline. I sometimes don’t like the delivered product so I have to exchange or refund it. At that time, I have to return the product by parcel service. It is very inconvenient. I consider carefully when I do online shopping.

강사 첨삭

Good morning!~

There are more people patronizing online shopping than offline.

However, there are also some advantages when you do it offline. 

Can you enumerate some?^^

Then, let\'s talk about these things in our class.

See you!~
~T. Chloe~

<composition>
I think that the most difference between online shopping and offline shopping is to have products right or not.

>>I think that most of the differences between online and offline shopping have to do with the right products or otherwise.
If I buy something online, I have to wait until it is delivered.

>>Correct.
Instead, I don’t need to go out to buy something.

>>Correct.

or>>But, I don\'t need to go out to buy something.
Another difference is price.

>>Another difference is the price.
Online shopping is mostly cheaper than offline.

>>Correct.
Nowadays, I usually use online shopping more often than offline.

>>Correct.
I sometimes don’t like the delivered product so I have to exchange or refund it.
>>Correct.

At that time, I have to return the product by parcel service.

>>Correct.
It is very inconvenient.

>>Correct.
I consider carefully when I do online shopping.

>>I carefully consider it when I do online shopping.^^

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