Homework
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Should students be allowed to eat during class?
I think they need to be allowed to eat. It is important which kind of food they can eat in the class. The food which doesn't have strong smell is fine, such as chocolate, chips, cookies and so on. But the other kind of food which has strong smell has to not to be allowed to eat in the class. If they feel hungry in the class, they can't focus on study. At least, they should be allowed to eat snack to concentrate on study well.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Emily!~Thank you for answering your homework!~It\'s been a long time that you didn\'t answer.kkk
And by the way, your idea is my opinion, too!But actually, even candies are not allowed in class
especially for elementary and high school students.
We can talk more of these things tomorrow!~~~Teacher Erine~~
Should students be allowed to eat during class?I think they need to be allowed to eat.
>>Correct.
It is important which kind of food they can eat in the class.
>>Correct.
The food which doesn\'t have strong smell is fine, such as chocolate, chips, cookies and so on.
>>Correct.
or>>Foods without a strong scent like chocolat, chips and cookies are fine.
But the other kind of food which has strong smell has to not to be allowed to eat in the class.
>>But the other kinds of food shouldn\'t be allowed to be eaten in class.
If they feel hungry in the class, they can\'t focus on study.
>>If they feel hungry in the class, they can\'t focus on studying.
At least, they should be allowed to eat snack to concentrate on study well.
>>At least they should be allowed to eat snack to do so.
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