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2013-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Good Mornig Jane~ Are you ready to enjoy X-mas? I am fully ready but I have only one day X-mas holiday. Yes, I know you have also one day X-mas holiday. But I thank to God giving me X-mas holiday, although I am not a christian. Suddenly, I am curious, Do Muslim celebrate X-mas and have a holiday? Well, I think Muslim will be happy if they have X-mas holiday. Everybody loves holidays regardless of religion. Oh~ Allah could be jealous. hihihi See you later in the calss, Jane! HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Put the word in brackets ( ) in the correct place in each sentence. Example: Hello, you need some help? (do) Hello, do you need some help? 1. Excuse me, how (much) is that little red watch? (much) 2. OK, would you like anything (else), Ms. [Name]? (else) 3. Excuse me but how much (these) are Hong Kong street maps? (these) 4. Do you have (any) American or Canadian newspapers? (any) 5. Of course, and how many would (you) like? (you)

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I really like your sense of humor! As far as I know, Muslims don\'t celebrate Christmas. They have their own religious holidays. Nevertheless, everybody enjoys holidays because it\'s a good time to rest. T. JanE ^^ Good Morning Jane~>> Correct Are you ready to enjoy X-mas? >> Correct I am fully ready but I have only one day X-mas holiday. >> Correct Yes, I know you have also one day X-mas holiday.>> Yes, I know you also have one day Christmas holiday. But I thank to God giving me X-mas holiday, although I am not a christian.>> But I thank God for the Christmas holiday although I am not a Christian. Suddenly, I am curious, Do Muslim celebrate X-mas and have a holiday? >> Suddenly, I am curious, do Muslims celebrate Christmas and have a holiday? Well, I think Muslim will be happy if they have X-mas holiday. >> Well, I think Muslims will be happy if they have a Christmas holiday. Everybody loves holidays regardless of religion.>> Correct Oh~ Allah could be jealous. hihihi>> Correct See you later in the class, Jane!>> Correct HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Put the word in brackets ( ) in the correct place in each sentence.Example:Hello, you need some help? (do)Hello, do you need some help?1. Excuse me, how (much) is that little red watch? (much)>> Correct 2. OK, would you like anything (else), Ms. [Name]? (else)>> Correct 3. Excuse me but how much (these) are Hong Kong street maps? (these)>> Excuse me but how much are these Hong Kong street maps? 4. Do you have (any) American or Canadian newspapers? (any)>> Correct 5. Of course, and how many would (you) like? (you) >> Correct  

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