homework

In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem? a lot of people prefer a big city or a town to the country because infrastructure in the city is developed well. it means people can live conveniently if they live in the city. once the city has a good infrastructure, people start to be gathered in the city. most peope have their own car and move with it. that's why there are as many cars as people in the city. it causes traffic zam and overpopulation. overpopulation causes more overpopulation and worse traffic zam. in my opinion, the best solution is moving infrastructure to smaller city. the smaller city that has infrastructure will be able to attract people. if government does it, many problems as well as the high volume of traffic will be solved.

Hello there^^^ I have read your composition and I really appreciated the effort you\'ve made. I already checked your sentences. See you in our next class...:) T. Mona   In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. >>Correct What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem? >>Correctit means people can live conveniently if they live in the city. >>Correct ( Always capitalize when you are starting a sentence. )a lot of people prefer a big city or a town to the country because infrastructure in the city is developed well. >>A lot of people prefer a big city or a town near the country because infrastructure is well developed.once the city has a good infrastructure, people start to be gathered in the city. >>Once a city has a good infrastructure, people start to gather there.most peope have their own car and move with it.>>Most people have their own car and use to move with it. that\'s why there are as many cars as people in the city. >>That\'s the reason why there are many cars as people in the city.it causes traffic zam and overpopulation. >>It causes traffic jam and overpopulation.overpopulation causes more overpopulation and worse traffic zam.>>Overpopulation causes the worse traffic jam.in my opinion, the best solution is moving infrastructure to smaller city. >>Correct ( Always capitalize first letter when starting a new sentence...:) )the smaller city that has infrastructure will be able to attract people. >>A smaller city that has infrastructures will attract more people.if government does it, many problems as well as the high volume of traffic will be solved. >>Correct ( Always capitalize first letter when starting a new sentence..:) ) >>OR You Can Say:Many problems as well as the high volume of traffic will be solved if the government will implement it.