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2013-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Merry Christmas Jane~ It's finally Christmas Eve. What a joy! ^^ To tell the truth, as I'm getting older, my pure mind like a innocent child, has disappeared. I lost my emotions such as, joys of Christmas,delights of New year and happiness of celebrating anniversay. But with the 10 minutes with you, I could find the delights and joys I've lost. Thank you, Jane~ PS: I think, Christmas becomes more Christmas when I say in english. Merry Christmas!!!! 메리 크리스마스!!! HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Put the words of each sentence in the right order. 1. OK, / on / I've / back / signed / now / the - OK, I've signed on the back now 2. I'll / it / you / back / take / for - I'll take you back for it 3. But / I / sit / the / on / want / to / don't / back - But I don't want to sit on the back 4. love / back / I'd / to / to / college / go - I'd love to go back to college. 5. home / a / get / back / hurry / to / I'm / in / not - I'm not in a hurry to get back home.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! Wow! I am inspired because of what you write here. Let\'s feel young together, and most importantly, let\'s look young all the time! Merry Christmas to you! I hope you will forever be joyful with your husband and Nana. Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^ Merry Christmas Jane~>> Correct It\'s finally Christmas Eve. >> Correct What a joy! ^^>> Correct To tell the truth, as I\'m getting older, my pure mind like a innocent child, has disappeared. >> To tell the truth, as I get older, my pure mind like that of an innocent child\'s, has disappeared. I lost my emotions such as, joys of Christmas, delights of New year and happiness of celebrating anniversary.>> Correct But with the 10 minutes with you, I could find the delights and joys I\'ve lost.>> Correct Thank you, Jane~>> Correct PS: I think, Christmas becomes more Christmas when I say in english. >> I think Christmas is truly Christmas when I say it in English. Merry Christmas!!!! 메리 크리스마스!!!>> Correct HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Put the words of each sentence in the right order.1. OK, / on / I\'ve / back / signed / now / the- OK, I\'ve signed on the back now>> Correct 2. I\'ll / it / you / back / take / for- I\'ll take you back for it>> Correct 3. But / I / sit / the / on / want / to / don\'t / back- But I don\'t want to sit on the back>> Correct 4. love / back / I\'d / to / to / college / go - I\'d love to go back to college.>> Correct 5. home / a / get / back / hurry / to / I\'m / in / not - I\'m not in a hurry to get back home. >> Correct  

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