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2013-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.on 2.at 3.at 4.in 5.on 6.at 7.on 8.at 9.on 10.in Yesterday, I saw a video about airplane crash. It was terrible. But when the airplane crash,it was amazing. However, I thaught many people died because of airplane crash. You can find it on the Youtube.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom! Merry Christmas! Thank you for sending in your homework.^^ You did a nice job! I would like to commend you for being a diligent student of mine and for not giving up in learning English! That\'s a wonderful attitude! Keep on learning new things/ words during your spare time. What are your plans for tonight? I was shocked about the plane crash, I\'m going to find it after work. See you in class! Enjoy your day! Take Care!Teacher Nina   Prepositions: at > times: at 8pm, at midnight, at 6:30> holiday periods: at Christmas, at Easter> at night> at the weekend> at lunchtime, at dinnertime, at breakfast time on > days: on Monday, on my birthday, on Christmas Day> days + morning / afternoon / evening / night: on Tuesday morning> dates: on the 20th of June  in > years: in 1992, in 2006> months: in December, in June> decades: in the sixties, in the 1790s> centuries: in the 19th century> seasons: in winter, in summer> in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening   no preparation> next week, year, month etc> last night, year etc> this morning, month etc> every day, night, years etc> today, tomorrow, yesterday   1.on >> Correct! 2.at >> in3.at >> Correct! 4.in >> Correct! 5.on >> Correct! 6.at >> Correct! 7.on >> in8.at >> Correct! 9.on >> Correct! 10.in >> Correct! Yesterday, I saw a video about airplane crash. >> Correct! >> OR: I saw a video of a plane crash.It was terrible. >> Correct! But when the airplane crash,it was amazing. >> But when the airplane crashed, it was amazing. >> OR: When the plane crashed, it was amazing.However, I thaught many people died because of airplane crash. >> However, I think many people died because of the plane crash. >> Better: However, I think many people died because of the accident.You can find it on the Youtube. >> You can find it on Youtube. >> OR: You can find the video on Youtube.

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