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<composition> My name is [Name], and I am 37 years old. I am a business person. I have been working for Samsung fire and marine insurance company for two years. It is one of the biggest insurance companies in Korea. I am a manager in the Customer Relationship Management department. My role in my company is to make strategies in Customer Relationship Management. I am good at analyzing customer data. I’d like to be a specialist in the Customer Relationship Management area. I used to be chosen as a best employee of the year. My job is rewarding and I take pride in my job. I can also learn many things from my coworkers and seniors. Now I live alone in a studio apartment. I think I am a diligent person. I usually get up early in the morning and work hard. In my free time, I usually read books and watch movies. This is my favorite pastime. My motto is 'Always do my best'

Hi there! ^^

Great Thursday afternoon to you! 

Did you have a good holiday? 

I hope so.^^
Tell me more about it during our class. 

Well, this one is a good introduction. 

It\'s nice to know some other information about you.

Anyway, I\'ll see you later during our class. 
Enjoy your day! 

Take care!

T. Chloe^

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My name is [Name], and I am 37 years old.

>> correct!

I am a business person.

>> Correct OR  >> I am a businessman. 

I have been working for Samsung fire and marine insurance company for two years.

>> correct! 

It is one of the biggest insurance companies in Korea.

>> correct! 

I am a manager in the Customer Relationship Management department.

>>  correct! 

My role in my company is to make strategies in Customer Relationship Management.

>>  correct! 

>> or: My role is to make strategies in Customer Relationship Management. 

I am good at analyzing customer data.

>> I am good at analyzing customer\'s data. 

I’d like to be a specialist in the Customer Relationship Management area.

>>  correct! 

I used to be chosen as a best employee of the year.

>> I was also chosen as the best employee of the year. 

My job is rewarding and I take pride in my job.

>>  correct! 

I can also learn many things from my coworkers and seniors.
>> correct! 

Now I live alone in a studio apartment.

>> correct!

>> or: I am now living in a studio-apartment. 

I think I am a diligent person.

>> correct! 

I usually get up early in the morning and work hard.

>>  correct! 

In my free time, I usually read books and watch movies.

>>  correct! [During my free time_.]

This is my favorite pastime.

>>  correct!

My motto is \'Always do my best\'

>>  correct! 

>> or: My motto is to \"Always do my best.\"