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Conflicts are necessary for relationships. But not healthy. Because there is a Hwa-Byung in who. Hwa-Byung only give a blow for Korean. Hwa-Byung's symptom is sudden death.It is very dangerous. So conflicts aren't necessary for healthy.

Hello there Tom! Happy Thursday? How was your holiday? I am excited to hear wonderful stories about your activities. ^^ Oh yes! I heard about this, but I was not able to understand it better when I was in the university. It\'s actually an interesting topic. ^^ I am so happy that you are learning a lot especially with the essay topics I give you. ^^ Great! I am more inspired to give you more interesting topics in class. Please go over the corrections below. See you in class! Teacher Nina   Conflicts are necessary for relationships. >> Correct! But not healthy. >> But it is not healthy. >> OR: Conflicts that happen very often are not healthy for a person.Because there is a Hwa-Byung in who. >> Did you mean: It is because there is condition called \"Hwa-Byung\" in WHO. (Did you mean World Health Organization?) Hwa-Byung only give a blow for Korean. >> Did you mean: Only Koreans experience Hwa-Byung. Hwa-Byung\'s symptom is sudden death. >> Hwa-Byung\'s complication is sudden death. >> OR: The bad effect of Hwa-Byung is sudden death. >> OR: The outcome of Hwa-Byung if untreated is sudden death. It is very dangerous. >> Correct! So conflicts aren\'t necessary for healthy. >> So conflict aren\'t necessary to be healthy.