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2013-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you could speak English perfectly, how would your life change? I expect the fufure like this. I'd like to speak English perfectly. However, I think my life won't change big but I can live abundance. I can watch English movie without subtitle and I can read English books, newspapers and so on. I also have many foreign friends. When I go to overseas, I can communicat with many people freely. Therefore I will go to abroad whenever I have times.

강사 첨삭

Great Friday afternoon Ms. [Name]! 

How are you doing? 

I hope that you are having a great time today. 

I just received an endorsement that you changed your contact number. 

I guess that next week will be the start if your graduate school. 

Anyway, I wish you luck on that. 
See you then on Monday! 

Well, I guess, if you speak in English perfectly, I would have not known you then. kkk 

And it will be quite a big change. 
I know that in the near future, you will be like that. 

Right? 
See you! 

Take care and enjoy your weekend! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


If you could speak English perfectly, how would your life change?


I expect the fufure like this.

>>  I am expecting the future like this. 

I\'d like to speak English perfectly.

>>  correct! 

However, I think my life won\'t change big but I can live abundance.

>>  However, I think there will not be a big change in my life but I can live abundantly. 

I can watch English movie without subtitle and I can read English books, newspapers and so on.

>>  I can watch English movies without any subtitle and I can read English books, newspapers and so on. 

I also have many foreign friends.

>>  I can also have many foreign friends. 

When I go to overseas, I can communicat with many people freely.

>>  When I go overseas, I can freely communicate with many people. 

Therefore I will go to abroad whenever I have times.

>>  Therefore, I will go abroad whenever I have time. 

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