homework
학생이 쓴 원문
No,I don't think so.
for example,when my mom is mad at me,my father uses humor to solve the problem.
However,my mom is mad at father too.
My mom hates humor when ishe is mad.
Me too.
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No,I don\'t think so.
>> Correct!
>> OR: No, I don\'t believe that humor is the best way to resolve conflicts.for example,when my mom is mad at me,my father uses humor to solve the problem.
>> Correct!
>> OR: For example, when my mom is mad at me, my father uses humor to solve the problem,However,my mom is mad at father too.
>> However, my mom is mad at my father too.My mom hates humor when ishe is mad.
>> Correct! (Spelling check: she ^^)Me too.
>> Correct!
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