Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you going to celebrate the New Year's day?
I'm going to celebrate with my family.
As you know, There are a lot of appointment in the late of year like Christmas.
So It's easy to negligent with
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강사 첨삭
Hello there dearie!!
Thank you very much for sending me this.
The composition started well but I guess there are still a lot that you want to say.
I\'d be looking forward to the second part of this. ^^
Have a great day~~
T.Kristel-
How are you going to celebrate the New Year\'s day?I\'m going to celebrate with my family.
>> I\'m going to celebrate it with my family.As you know, There are a lot of appointment in the late of year like Christmas.
>> As you know. there are a lot of appointments at the end of the year like Christmas.So It\'s easy to negligent with
>> so it\'s easy to neglect it...---to be continue
>> to be continued.
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