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2014-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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How are you going to celebrate the New Year's day? I'm going to celebrate with my family. As you know, There are a lot of appointment in the late of year like Christmas. So It's easy to negligent with ---to be continue

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Hello there dearie!! Thank you very much for sending me this. The composition started well but I guess there are still a lot that you want to say. I\'d be looking forward to the second part of this. ^^ Have a great day~~ T.Kristel- How are you going to celebrate the New Year\'s day?I\'m going to celebrate with my family. >> I\'m going to celebrate it with my family.As you know, There are a lot of appointment in the late of year like Christmas. >> As you know. there are a lot of appointments at the end of the year like Christmas.So It\'s easy to negligent with >> so it\'s easy to neglect it...---to be continue >> to be continued.

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