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2014-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Wow. Today is last day in this year. I'm going to church and I have a meaningful time. I was very busy and tough during this year. I hope that I have a better new year. Happy new year! What kind of things make you laugh? People arguing loudly? Someone slipping on a banana peel and falling? Plays on words (also called 'puns')? Cartoons? Funny movies? etc. I had gone to the membership training last friday for two days with my colleagues. We had Ya-Ja time. It was very fun so I laugh loudly. Ya-Ja is taking down to older people. We can call thier name and tell about grievances. It was so fun. For example, we said 'hey, don't to that.', 'hey, I don't like it.' something like that. Of course our boss understood us. In my case, I laugh in this funny and unique situation. I think we need jokes in our life. When we laugh, we will be more healthy. Hahaha

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

Yes, I do agree with you that will need time to have some fun and laughing could make us feel better. We just need to enjoy our lives with a smile on our faces. I encourage you to enjoy leaning English because in this way we can learn more.

Have a great day!!!

T. Kathrine


Wow. Today is last day in this year.

>>Wow! It\'s the last day of the year.

I\'m going to church and I have a meaningful time.

>>I\'m going to church and have a meaningful time.

I was very busy and tough during this year.

>>I had a tough and busy year.

I hope that I have a better new year. Happy new year!

>>I hope I\'ll have a better year ahead. Happy New Year!!!

What kind of things make you laugh?

>>What are the things that make you laugh?

People arguing loudly?

>>Are people arguing loudly?

Someone slipping on a banana peel and falling?

>>Someone slippered on a banana peel and fell.

Plays on words (also called \'puns\')? Cartoons? Funny movies? etc.

>>Plays on words (also called \"puns\"), cartoons, funny movies, etc.

I had gone to the membership training last friday for two days with my colleagues.

>>I went to the membership training last Friday for two days with my colleagues.

We had Ya-Ja time.

>>correct

It was very fun so I laugh loudly. 

>>I was very funny, so I laughed loudly.

Ya-Ja is taking down to older people.

>>correct

We can call thier name and tell about grievances.

>> We can call their names and tell about their grievances.

It was so fun.

>>correct

>>I had so much fun.

For example, we said \'hey, don\'t to that.\', \'hey, I don\'t like it.\' something like that. 

>>For example, we say something like this, \"Hey, don\'t do that,\" or \" Hey, I don\'t like it. 

Of course our boss understood us. In my case,

>>Of course, my boss understood us.

I laugh in this funny and unique situation.

>>I laughed in this funny and unique situation.

I think we need jokes in our life.

>>I think we need to have some fun in our lives.

When we laugh, we will be more healthy. Hahaha

>>When we laugh, we\'ll be healthier. Hahahah 

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