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Hello there,
Yes, I do agree with you that will need time to have some fun and laughing could make us feel better. We just need to enjoy our lives with a smile on our faces. I encourage you to enjoy leaning English because in this way we can learn more.
Have a great day!!!
T. Kathrine
Wow. Today is last day in this year.
>>Wow! It\'s the last day of the year.
I\'m going to church and I have a meaningful time.
>>I\'m going to church and have a meaningful time.
I was very busy and tough during this year.
>>I had a tough and busy year.
I hope that I have a better new year. Happy new year!
What kind of things make you laugh?
>>What are the things that make you laugh?
People arguing loudly?
>>Are people arguing loudly?
Someone slipping on a banana peel and falling?
>>Someone slippered on a banana peel and fell.
Plays on words (also called \'puns\')? Cartoons? Funny movies? etc.
I had gone to the membership training last friday for two days with my colleagues.
>>I went to the membership training last Friday for two days with my colleagues.
We had Ya-Ja time.
>>correct
It was very fun so I laugh loudly.
>>I was very funny, so I laughed loudly.
Ya-Ja is taking down to older people.
>>correct
We can call thier name and tell about grievances.
>>
We can call their names and tell about their grievances.
It was so fun.
>>correct
>>I had so much fun.
For example, we said \'hey, don\'t to that.\', \'hey, I don\'t like it.\' something like that.
>>For example, we say something like this, \"Hey, don\'t do that,\" or \" Hey, I don\'t like it.
Of course our boss understood us. In my case,
>>Of course, my boss understood us.
I laugh in this funny and unique situation.
>>I laughed in this funny and unique situation.
I think we need jokes in our life.
>>I think we need to have some fun in our lives.
When we laugh, we will be more healthy. Hahaha
>>When we laugh, we\'ll be healthier. Hahahah
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