Homework 4
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved?
A1. Students can benefit from this trend for some reason. They can not only have wide experiences but also improve their language skills. On the other hand, it affects against the countries where students are from. Because it is highly possible that students will stay in abroad ever since they leave their home, which is bad for the economy and development of the countries. So the governments are required to make an education system better so that students can get a good domestic education.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Nice of you to share your thoughts on this one! ^ ^
I think the best way for students not to leave their countries of origin anymore is to develop a good system of education that can be globally competitive. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT (*reasons)
They can not only have wide experiences but also improve their language skills.
>>CORRECT or
>>They can not only gain vast experiences but improve their language skills as well.
On the other hand, it affects against the countries where students are from.
>>On the other hand, it would have an impact on the countries where these students are from.
Because it is highly possible that students will stay in abroad ever since they leave their home, which is bad for the economy and development of the countries.
>>It is highly possible that these students would opt to permanently reside there which affects their country\'s economy and development.
So the governments are required to make an education system better so that students can get a good domestic education.
>>CORRECT
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