Homework 4/13
학생이 쓴 원문
What amazing thing would you like to happen in your life and why?
I sometimes think that I have an ability to teleport to some place.
It takes an hour to go my workplace.
When I get up late or I am very tired, I used to imagine if I can move instantly to the workplace.
강사 첨삭
I think that this would be an amazing talent! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. ^^
What amazing thing would you like to happen in your life and why?
>>Correct.
I sometimes think that I have an ability to teleport to some place.
>> I sometimes think that I have the ability to teleport to someplace.
It takes an hour to go my workplace.
>> It takes an hour to go to my workplace.
When I get up late or I am very tired, I used to imagine if I can move instantly to the workplace.
>> When I get up late or I am very tired, I try to imagine that I can move instantly to my workplace.
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