Homework (4.14)
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What kind of exciting activities do you want to try on weekends?
A. I want to try to go camping. I haven\'t tried to do that because my children was too young to go with.
It was very hard to sleep outside home with a baby. In addition, Public camping area was almost closed due to pandemic in last year.
It is very expensive to buy all camping equipment and needs enough space in a house. so, I\'d like to try caravan camping at first. We
can borrow camping car and all equipment there, We need to prepare only our food. I want to give my sun experience about sleeping
ac ar. He loves cars. That\'s the important reason.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ji [이름]! Wow that sounds very exciting :) Can\'t wait to hear you stories when you try camping with your family :)
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>> I want to try camping.
I haven\'t tried to do that because my children was too young to go with.
>> I haven\'t tried to do that because my children were too young to go with.
It was very hard to sleep outside home with a baby.
>>It was very hard to sleep away from you house with a baby.
In addition, Public camping area was almost closed due to pandemic in last year.
>>In addition, public camping area closed due to the pandemic since last year.
It is very expensive to buy all camping equipment and needs enough space in a house.
>>It is very expensive to buy all camping equipment and needs.
so, I\'d like to try caravan camping at first.
>> That\'s why I would like to try caravan camping first.
We can borrow camping car and all equipment there, We need to prepare only our food.
>> We can borrow a camping car which comes with all the needed equipment. The only thing that we would need to prepare is food.
I want to give my sun experience about sleeping car.
>> I want to give my son an experience in sleeping in a car.
He loves cars. That\'s the important reason.
>> He loves cars and that\'s one of the main reasons why I want to try this.
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