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2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hi good morning Today is really heavy white dust day. I think most of them come from china. I hate white dust and china that leaves the situation as it is. Anyway last friday two bosses of the korea have met at 판문점 I was touched when they had met at the first time And had handshaked. There was lots of people to take a picture of honor scene that they had met. I also saw the scene on the internet by realtime. 3 monthes ago no one can image that situation It looked like before war. But now it totally has changed. They said like following these. Fiist thing is no more war from now on And next is no more neclare weapon so two bosses of country will get over it and monitor it Last is coperation with south and north korea in lot of things such as economy and trade If it will be processed as they say, we can go anywhere in north korea and we can go to europe by only train not the sea and air I really really hope it I want to tell them thank you for your brave colleege and right dicision.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!(\",)

I can tell that you are really happy on the result of the summit. I hope everything that the two leaders had agreed on will happen.(\",)

~T. Lynn

Hi good morning

>> Hi, good morning.
 Today is really heavy white dust day.

>> Today, the fine dust is really heavy.
 I think most of them come from china.

>> correct!
 I hate white dust and china that leaves the situation as it is.

>> I hate the fine dust and China for not doing anything to solve the problem.
 Anyway last friday two bosses of the korea have met at 판문점

>> Anyway, last Friday the leaders of Korea had met at Panmunjom.
I was touched when they had met at the first time And had handshake.

>> I was touched when they had met for the first time and did a handshake.
 There was lots of people to take a picture of honor scene that they had met.

>> There were lots of people who took pictures of their first meeting.
 I also saw the scene on the internet by real-time.

>> correct!
 3 monthes ago no one can image that situation.

>> Three months ago, no one can imagine that to happen.
 It looked like before war. But now it totally has changed.

>> It looked like a scene before the war. But now it had totally changed.
 They said like following these.

>> They agreed on the following.
 Fiist thing is no more war from now on

>> First, no more war from now on.
 And next is no more neclare weapon so two bosses of country will get over it and monitor it

>> Second, North Korea will not make nuclear weapons anymore and the two leaders will monitor it.
 Last is coperation with south and north korea in lot of things such as economy and trade
>> Lastly, both Koreas will help each other for economic progress.
If it will be processed as they say, we can go anywhere in north korea and we can go to europe by only train not the sea and air
>> If everything they said will happen, we can go anywhere in North Korea and we can go to Europe by train and not only through sea and air.
I really really hope it

>> I really hope this will happen.
 I want to tell them thank you for your brave colleege and right dicision.

>>I want to thank them for their bravery or courage and for making the right decision.

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