Homework 4

2013-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: WHICH DO YOU PREFER BEING FAMOUS OR BEING RICH?WHY? I will select being rich. But this being rich should be very very rich. The reason that I want to be rich is because of many things I want to buy. I want to do a shopping everyday. If I were rich, I will buy clothes, comestics, shoes, nail polish and so on. Then it makes me happy maybe.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^, Thank yu for doing your 4th homework!! :) Anyway, I think so too. I want to be rich as well!! Talk to you in class!! Bye!! ~T.Chelsea HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:WHICH DO YOU PREFER BEING FAMOUS OR BEING RICH?WHY?I will select being rich. >>I will choose being rich.But this being rich should be very very rich. >>but being rich should be vey rich.The reason that I want to be rich is because of many things I want to buy. >>The reason why I wasnt to be rich is because there\'s a lot of things I want to buy.I want to do a shopping everyday. >>I want to go shopping everyday.If I were rich, I will buy clothes, comestics, shoes, nail polish and so on. >>If I am rich, I will buy clothes, cosmetics, shoes, nail polish and etc.Then it makes me happy maybe. >>Then maybe it will make me happy.

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