Homework 4

ESSAY: What would you consider as an economic weakness of Korea? I think there is so much polarization of economic in Korea. The reach become richer, the poor become poorer as time goes by. It is problem not only in Korea but in all countries. It is because of capitalism, so Korea has to make an effort to reduce the side-effect of capitalism but Korea is not good at this, I think. So, I think an economic weakness of Korea is Korea is not good at resolving polarization problem.

Hi [이름]!^^ I think the economic issues vary from country to country. The people have the right to speak and I think that you reactions come from your observations.Thank you for your answers today. Keep up the long sentence. Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I think there is so much polarization of economic in Korea. >> I  think there is so much polarization of the economy in Korea. The reach become richer, the poor become poorer as time goes by. >> The rich become richer, the poor become poorer as time goes by. It is problem not only in Korea but in all countries. >> It is a problem not only in Korea but in all countries. It is because of capitalism, so Korea has to make an effort to reduce the side-effect of capitalism but Korea is not good at this, I think. >> CORRECT OR> I think that capitalism must be reduced but Korea is not so good at this. So, I think an economic weakness of Korea is Korea is not good at resolving polarization problem. >> So, I think an economic weakness of Korea is the Korea is not good at resolving a polarization problem.