Homework #4
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Adela!
Today's homework is difficult for me to answer the question.
Because I like eating some foods,
as you know, there are many delicious foods in the world.
Q. If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain why you’d choose it.
A.
If I were a skinny person, I would like to choose chicken, because I love chicken!!
But I’m not, so I choose a salmon. These days I enjoy eating some foods with salmon.
Also, salmon is a one of the super foods that are nutritious and help make one’s immune system stronger like blue berry, beans, broccoli and so on.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate, thank you for sharing me your food. kkk.. I mean your thoughts.
Take care!
Hi Adela!
Today\'s homework is difficult for me to answer the question.
>> Today\'s homework/question is difficult for me to answer.
Because I like eating some foods,
>> Because I love eating.
as you know, there are many delicious foods in the world.
>> As you know, there are many delicious foods in the world.
Q. If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain why you’d choose it.
A.
If I were a skinny person, I would like to choose chicken, because I love chicken!!
>> CORRECT
But I’m not, so I choose a salmon.
>> CORRECT
These days I enjoy eating some foods with salmon.
>> These days, I enjoy eating foods with salmon.
Also, salmon is a one of the super foods that are nutritious and help make one’s immune system stronger like blue berry, beans, broccoli and so on.
>> Also, salmon is one of the most nutritious foods. It makes our immune system stronger, just like blue berry, beans, broccoli, and so on.
Take care!
Hi Adela!
Today\'s homework is difficult for me to answer the question.
>> Today\'s homework/question is difficult for me to answer.
Because I like eating some foods,
>> Because I love eating.
as you know, there are many delicious foods in the world.
>> As you know, there are many delicious foods in the world.
Q. If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain why you’d choose it.
A.
If I were a skinny person, I would like to choose chicken, because I love chicken!!
>> CORRECT
But I’m not, so I choose a salmon.
>> CORRECT
These days I enjoy eating some foods with salmon.
>> These days, I enjoy eating foods with salmon.
Also, salmon is a one of the super foods that are nutritious and help make one’s immune system stronger like blue berry, beans, broccoli and so on.
>> Also, salmon is one of the most nutritious foods. It makes our immune system stronger, just like blue berry, beans, broccoli, and so on.
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