Homework 4

2016-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

One thing is about happiness of daily When i was a elementary school student, i could playing without any of worries. It is so Exciting aspect to us. Becaues there weren't pressure about study, exam and future compare with now. Another thing is realize others life. Studying foreign language and Communicating with foreign people are so attractive. Communicating with them means path of knowing their culture, thingking and making friends. Then i'll have a wide sight for global world.

강사 첨삭

Thrusday it is! I hope you will enjoy this day my dear Sun!^^By the way, I commend you for a job well done... Two thumbs up!I can\'t wait to hear your voice again tomorrow. Take care and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ One thing is about happiness of daily >>One thing about my happiness...When i was a elementary school student, i could playing without any of worries. >>When I was in elementary, I could play without any worries. OR: When I was an elemtary school student, I could play without any worries. It is so Exciting aspect to us. >>It was very exciting!Becaues there weren\'t pressure about study, exam and future compare with now. >>Because there was no pressure abut studying, exams and future.Another thing is realize others life. >>Another thing is realizing other\'s lives.Studying foreign language and Communicating with foreign people are so attractive. >>Studying foreign language and Communicating with foreign people are 2 very important things too. Communicating with them means path of knowing their culture, thingking and making friends. >>Communitcating with them is a way of knowing their culture and making new friends.Then i\'ll have a wide sight for global world. >>And I could also have a wide range about the global world.

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