Homework 4
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. What does the idiom “Time is money.” mean? Do you agree with it?
A1. The idiom \"Time is money\" means that time is as valuable as money. I definately agree on it. The outcomes of our lives depend on how to use the time effectively. As effort doesn\'t betray us, if we make efforts during the time, we will bear fruits in the future for sure. The result of spending time effectively can be whatever we want such as a gift, love or money. To improve my English skill, I use my morning time by taking a class of PowerEnglish. Though it\'s hard to wake up in the early mornig, it is very rewarding to me as I see I\'m getting better. So all that matters is to live the time worthwhile.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Indeed, and I definitely agree with you. It\'s the same way with the saying; \"time is gold\". We really should manage our time well and maximize the use of it to yield good results. So instead of checking out social media apps, maybe we can find more ways to be productive, either developing a skill or learning ways to make extra money! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
I definately agree on it.
>>I definitely agree with it.
The outcomes of our lives depend on how to use the time effectively.
>>CORRECT
As effort doesn\'t betray us, if we make efforts during the time, we will bear fruits in the future for sure.
>>CORRECT
The result of spending time effectively can be whatever we want such as a gift, love or money.
>>CORRECT
To improve my English skill, I use my morning time by taking a class of PowerEnglish.
>>To improve my English skill, I use my morning time by taking a class from PowerEnglish.
Though it\'s hard to wake up in the early morning, it is very rewarding to me as I see I\'m getting better.
>>CORRECT
So all that matters is to live the time worthwhile.
>>So all that matters is to make use of our time wisely.
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