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2020-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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1. Who is your best friend? I have only 1 friend, but now I forgot his name because now I\'m not in the same class with him anymore. 2. What do you enjoy doing with your best friend? I enjoyed with him sharing my food, but now I don\'t enjoy anything with him. 3. What are the things that you know about each other? Last time before he is not my friend, he was not a good boy. But now, he became a good boy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Good job with your homework tonight! :)

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Sheila

I have only 1 friend, but now I forgot his name because now I\'m not in the same class with him anymore.

>>I only have 1 friend but not I forgot his name because I\'m no in the same class as him anymore.

I enjoyed with him sharing my food, but now I don\'t enjoy anything with him.
>>I enjoyed sharing my food with him but now I don\'t enjoy anything with him.

Last time before he is not my friend, he was not a good boy. But now, he became a good boy.

>>Before he became my friend, he was not a good boy but now he became a good boy.

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