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2014-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.b 2.a 3.a 4.b 5.a 6.b 7.a 8.a 9.b 10.a Today is New years day! I'll eat a rice cake soup. My cousins went to the mountain to see the sun. Now, I,m thirteen years old! I'm so happy~

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Happy New Year Tom!!! It\'s the first Thursday of 2014. Yipee! Wow! It means you are a young boy now. ^^ Job well done with your homework! It\'s nice to start the year with being positive and doing your best! Keep up the good work and stay focused. See you in class! Teacher Nina   Exchange implies a trade, like if you asked your friend to exchange phone numbers.Change means to make it different, so if you asked \'could I change this\' you might expect the cashier to fix it, or maybe change something about it like color etc. Examples: I changed my hair color to purple. (I dyed my hair purple.)This doesn\'t mean that I replaced my hair,  it means that I did something that made my existing hair different.I exchanged the shirt I had bought for a pair of pants.This means that I gave back the shirt, and replaced it with a pair of pants. The shirt is not changed in any way; it is replaced by a different purchase.   1.b >> exchange 2.a >> change 3.a >> Correct! 4.b >> Correct! 5.a >> Correct! 6.b >> Correct! 7.a >> Correct! 8.a >> changed 9.b >> Correct! 10.a >> exchangedToday is New years day! >> Today is New Year\'s Day! >> OR: It\'s New Year\'s Day today. I\'ll eat a rice cake soup. >> I\'ll eat rice cake soup.My cousins went to the mountain to see the sun. >> Correct! >> OR: My cousins went to the mountain to see the first sunrise of this year.Now, I,m thirteen years old! >> Correct! ( I\'m thirteen years old now.) >> OR: I just turned thirteen years old.  I\'m so happy~ >> Correct!

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